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Whipping my thighs,
you set the bar too high.
Ravenous shadow,
keeping score in time.

Couldn't you let me go?

     ..we'd never agree.



Pace,
tick,
point,
prime.

I've been inside,
    
     locked,
   tripping the ocean.

Guess in time.
    -you'll be right, just give it a name.



We live in unforgiving flesh,
just reflections in our cup of tea.
We're backwards back teeth,
chomping down each other's leaves.

We're full of X marks,
but fuck it -
we found our own way home

   between the honeycombs

at a thousand miles per hour.



We float down from space to die alone,
genuflecting to what we stood for,
both still guessing our morals.

Cigarettes on sweet tongues.


Truly,
the popes say we should stop playing
sunday school sharp glass charades.
©2009 ~nightmandl
:iconnightmandl:

Author's Comments

Guess the meaning of this and you get a lolly!

Great fun to write, wish I could do this all the time.

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:iconchaian:
Aliens!!

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spysays :
I write to watch the pen dance...
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My page...
My job... W.I.P
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:iconnightmandl:
Close! haha

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Float far away,
on a wooden ashtray.
You starve, how you beg,
just to feel like you’re saved,
in limbo with the rest of the sea.
:iconchaian:
nuts...
?

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spysays :
I write to watch the pen dance...
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My page...
My job... W.I.P
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:iconnightmandl:
i ain't tellin!

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Float far away,
on a wooden ashtray.
You starve, how you beg,
just to feel like you’re saved,
in limbo with the rest of the sea.
:iconchaian:
maybe whisper it in my ear?

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spysays :
I write to watch the pen dance...
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My page...
My job... W.I.P
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:iconnightmandl:
*pss pssh tic la sss guhn pah*

:D

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Float far away,
on a wooden ashtray.
You starve, how you beg,
just to feel like you’re saved,
in limbo with the rest of the sea.
:iconchaian:
Atlanteans?!

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spysays :
I write to watch the pen dance...
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My page...
My job... W.I.P
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:iconnxoxtxhxixnxg:
well... i dont know if i am even going to be close. i will try however. i think that it is about people being hypocritical and doing what they think should be done rather than what they feel.

but thats just me. :D

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"we can't stop here...this is bat country!"
:iconnightmandl:
that's actually really really close!
someone get this person a lolly!

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Float far away,
on a wooden ashtray.
You starve, how you beg,
just to feel like you’re saved,
in limbo with the rest of the sea.

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